Publication Date: June 26, 2025
A book bearing her name on the spine is Deirdre Collins’ driving passion. A book that a reader will remove from a library shelf to take home on a rainy afternoon. A book she can dedicate to her late father. Her dream is to join the Chicago school of writers led by Saul Bellow, Nelson Algren, and Stuart Dybek.
When she is unable to publish her first novel, depression lands her on suicide watch in an Albuquerque behavioral hospital. There she meets Max Fletcher, a handsome young man with drive and genius who is battling demons of his own.
After discharge, they move to different parts of the country and lose track of each other. Max becomes a successful entertainment producer for a late night talk show.
As her father’s health fails, Deirdre leaves the artistic community in New Mexico to lead a quiet life in a rural Illinois town. She writes and tends her great aunt’s garden. One morning she finds a teenager on her property with a gun. After reporting the incident to her local high school, she lands a job supervising a room for at-risk kids. A healthy life style and a commitment to her writing enables her to conquer mood swings that derailed her as a young woman. Working with kids who struggle with depression and anxiety, mood disorders, and other behavioral problems opens her mind and then her heart to the wide range of sorrow and joy on the human spectrum.
A call from Max Fletcher upends Deirdre’s peaceful existence. Max promises publishing connections which have eluded Deirdre. She is flattered by Max’s attention and his desire to help her achieve her dreams. Then she discovers his true intentions. A confrontation in New York reveals Max’s deteriorating health which he believes is untreatable by medication or therapy. When Deirdre discovers that Max has plagiarized her work, she must decide whether to take legal action against him.
Deirdre Collins struggles with her mental health while trying to fulfill her dream as a writer.
In Splenditude, author Eileen T. Lynch details the main character’s efforts that appear to be bogged down by delusions, manic episodes, and a series of ill-fated adventures.
While the concept sounds promising, the end result is too disjointed to foster any sort of connection with the storyline. However, since the story is told in first person by Deirdre, the pace accurately reflects the chaos of her life.
Through therapy and hospital visits, she meets a man named Max, who manipulates Deirdre’s gift of writing for his own interests. Multiple time shifts are occurring within the story that could use a better transition to alert readers.
Splenditude serves up a story focusing on a mentally ill woman’s struggles to become a writer.
Eileen Lynch  is a writer, editor, and teacher. After managing an ethics program for an international association, she switched careers to teach. She is a teaching assistant for The Writer’s Hotel and has participated in writing workshops at the University of Chicago, Albuquerque, and Taos, New Mexico. Her work has been published in print and online magazines.
